Essay Revision 2

I need an essay revision.  A persuasive essay on gun control that is clear and concise. I need it to reinforce a thesis that idicates why guns are harmful to society.  I have uploaded my first draft and ruberic. I need a second draft.

**It must be plagiarism free.

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